after talking over with a teacher about my pictures. i was advised to focus on the two remaining band members and where they are going from this point. therefore the article was focused less on Dark Thoughts and more on Young Phoenix. instead of using the whole band for pictures, I changed my focus and used two new people and foucsed my pictures on only two people instead of the whole band. The article featured around Tim and Kay as they are the two members being interviewed. i have alomost finished editing my cover and i am moving in to creating the contents page and adding my article to my main feature page.